two 1200-words essays of two different themes, each essay has to have a summary of that theme. the instructions in the attached file.

try the last attach file, it will probably work,, please read the description again because i have edited it. the body paragraphs of the two essays have to be Toulmin style.
User_2501 | Oct 18, 2012, 13:40 PM

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ok, it worked.. I went through the new attachments.. fine, Ill work accordingly.. please assign it to me.. Thanks
User_2148 | Oct 18, 2012, 15:38 PM

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Hi.. I have uploaded the work. Thanks
User_2148 | Oct 21, 2012, 16:32 PM

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Hi, I just read the essays .. first in the death essay, I found some repetitive, unrelated parts & and some events that were not mentioned like his dog's death, the the body development was not tuolmin style. also, you didn't do the summary on the death events. i edited the essay and i deleted the unwanted parts. try to do the requirements & add more to the essay i uploaded. The second essay, the body development wasn't in the tuolmin style. bring more details and explanations to every LOVE story on the body paragraph, like family love, his love to his dog, girlfriend, sister, reservation and friends. Please follow toulmin style on the body paragraph of both essays; Toulmin style Topic sentence/ Claim Commentary( Expand your claim) Transition( make sure to specify the point leading to evidence) Evidence ( Quote or paraphrase/ Cite to prove your explanation) Transition to more evidence Introduction / evidence explanation Concluding statement Please do it ASAP
User_2501 | Oct 21, 2012, 22:39 PM

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ok. will do that; but I'll be able to deliver by morning.. Hope thats fine with you.
User_2148 | Oct 21, 2012, 23:27 PM

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ya sure..but did u open the attached file??
User_2501 | Oct 21, 2012, 23:52 PM

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yes I did..
User_2148 | Oct 21, 2012, 23:53 PM

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the last attached file
User_2501 | Oct 21, 2012, 23:57 PM

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ok good luck
User_2501 | Oct 21, 2012, 23:59 PM

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Hi, Please read the last attached file (NOVEL), you will find the explanations written by steps.
User_2501 | Oct 22, 2012, 13:27 PM

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Hi. I uploaded the work.. Thanks
User_2148 | Oct 22, 2012, 14:29 PM

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Hey palsh, i am not satisfied with the love essay. the body paragraphs need to rewrite them. you can see all of what i want in the attached file.
User_2501 | Oct 22, 2012, 22:27 PM

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I put an example of a body paragraph that i have written before, PLEASE do like the example in the body paragraphs of the love essay.
User_2501 | Oct 22, 2012, 22:31 PM

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ok. Will do that
User_2148 | Oct 22, 2012, 22:35 PM

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i'd like the essay to match the required instructions. Please if you needed any guidance don't hesitate to question me. I need you to confirm that you have understood the requirements to get the proper way of writing this essay.Following the required is the key. The writing itself is not enough my friend.
User_2501 | Oct 22, 2012, 22:51 PM

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when is it going to be done ?
User_2501 | Oct 23, 2012, 16:31 PM

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Hi.. Ya I want to do it properly so that you don't have any complaint.. :) will deliver by midnight
User_2148 | Oct 23, 2012, 16:32 PM

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Hi I'm still waiting and nothing has delivered yet!!
User_2501 | Oct 24, 2012, 08:02 AM

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Hi., I uploaded the work..hope its as per your expectations.. I've done it so many times.. Thanks
User_2148 | Oct 24, 2012, 08:15 AM

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yes your work has been improved and i thank you for that yet i think you could improve some points in your work i have mentioned the areas where they need to be improved. I would like you to look at them in the attached file. the paper has been revised by my professor and i think we could get a better chance to get a better grade. if possible do the changes and send them to me soon tonight. The file name is (love edited 2)
User_2501 | Oct 24, 2012, 21:14 PM

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Hi. The payment for this work is not released yet. Please do the needful.. Thanks
User_2148 | Oct 29, 2012, 14:51 PM

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