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I have attached the essay that I did, which I got 58% in it. And I got my feedback from my teacher in the marking criteria attached... please check the marking criteria and make the changes on MY ESSAY(the one attached) in order to reach above 70%. Thank you. The question is: According to Bloomberg, 8 out of 10 entrepreneurs fail within the first 18 months. Why is that so? What can be done to improve the success rate? Discuss opposing perspectives.

Date Posted: 03/02/2017
Category: English
Due Date: 04/02/2017
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I have attached the essay that I did, which I got 58% in it. And I got my feedback from my teacher in the marking criteria attached... please check the marking criteria and make the changes on MY ESSAY(the one attached) in order to reach above 70%. Thank you. The question is: According to Bloomberg, 8 out of 10 entrepreneurs fail within the first 18 months. Why is that so? What can be done to improve the success rate? Discuss opposing perspectives.
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