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An already written essay that needs academic improvement .. just add some information and correct some mistakes. Don't make major changes!!!

Date Posted: 19/03/2013
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Due Date: 20/03/2013
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An already written essay that needs academic improvement .. just add some information and correct some mistakes. Don't make major changes!!!
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lavin 13 years, 6 months ago
Rated 9.33 earned 444.00 around 13 assignments.
I would like to help you with your essay improvement. I am a professional in freelance tutoring and my aim is to provide quality. I have vast experience in doing academic papers and thus I will the necessary changes as required. I will ensure that I meet set deadlines. Give me this chance to work with you.I will be glad to hear from you.
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  • Have u read the attached file?? Do u know about the subject??? the essay is already in MLA format .. but the works cited needs to be in that format 2. I want to get a straight A for it
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 04:56 AM
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ScholarPro 13 years, 6 months ago
Rated 9.98 earned 5625.81 around 69 assignments.
Hello I am teaching management in one of the universities in London, and doing my PhD there. I can make the improvements, if you want. Thanks
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  • have u read the essay in the attachment?
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 04:50 AM
  • Yes, that's why I offered my bid. But still checking
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 04:51 AM
  • I mean .. do u know about the essay subject??
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 04:51 AM
  • It is already in MLA format but the works cited is not!!! I need it to be perfect
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 04:53 AM
  • That's the thing, I am not a master in kinetics but I can check the citations and correct it. MLA clearly defines how a work should be cited depending on the sources of your essay, and I can make the correction.
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 04:56 AM
  • ok..if u r gonna be assigned this work, I need u to add information from two other sources and add them to the rest. just add some lines to my paragraphs, I would like u to add one more paragraph and make the conclusion better. Is that doable??
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:02 AM
  • OK, I can also find you additional sources. Please also let me know my deadline.
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 05:05 AM
  • i need it done exactly in 30 hours..is that ok??
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:08 AM
  • please .. if u need any specific details about the assignment, just ask!!
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:10 AM
  • Alright. That's enough time.
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 05:10 AM
  • btw .. i'm willing to put bonus if u did the job well
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:12 AM
  • Final Question: do you want any changes in the text? (Apart from 2 additional sources)?
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 05:14 AM
  • if u can make it better .. u go ahead and impress me
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:16 AM
  • If you will be continuing to behave so, assign it to someone else.
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 05:17 AM
  • What I only want to help you and fix the minor things, I am not here to impress anyone, hope this is clear too
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 05:19 AM
  • sorry about that .. i didn't mean to insult u i just wanted to make u feel comfortable with the work I apologize again
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:22 AM
  • yes it's clear
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:24 AM
  • No problem, no need for apologies.. I just wanted to make sure that everything's clear.. Thanks for the understanding. I will provide you some draft work within 8-9 hours latest.. Then you may let me know your comments, that we can work to make it as the best. I already got my source for MLA formatting, I will make a search for additional sources..Then we'll see.. Talk to you in few hours. Take care
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 05:26 AM
  • u 2 .. thanx
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 05:28 AM
  • Hello I am sending you two documents. In the first document, you may track my changes, where I made the adjustment and corrections. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/78538175/Final%20Showing%20Markup.doc The second document is the final one, that is ready to print (in pdf format). https://dl.dropbox.com/u/78538175/Final.pdf The reason why I am sending so is I am not sure whether you are familiar with the MS Word option to see the initial and final documents. I can also direct you in the word file, if you want to see the final version in Word document.. Please let me know your comments Regards
    ScholarPro | Mar 19, 2013, 12:00 PM
  • Please ,, direct me to Word file good job thank u
    User_2501 | Mar 19, 2013, 18:30 PM
  • Hi, I do not know which version of Word you use, but you can check from the "Review" tab on Word. On this tab, there is Tracking Section, where you can see the original of the file (the one that you prepared), the final version that I submitted, and the changes made (mark-ups shown) in the document. Here's how you get there. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/78538175/Capture.PNG If you want a final final product without all these, I am attaching you a final copy without any changes tracking option. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/78538175/Abdulqader_Fatani_Final.docx By the way, if you submit hard copy, you may print it directly. But the if you need to submit as soft copy, I recommend you send the last document I sent you now, as changes cannot be tracked by anyone. Let me know if you have any other questions
    ScholarPro | Mar 20, 2013, 00:33 AM
  • Please ,, direct me to Word file good job thank u
    User_2501 | Mar 20, 2013, 02:51 AM
  • https://dl.dropbox.com/u/78538175/Abdulqader_Fatani_Final.docx Here you may find the final work.
    ScholarPro | Mar 20, 2013, 02:54 AM
  • Hello, hope you're doing fine. Please let me know whether you got the file and everything's all good. Take care.
    ScholarPro | Mar 20, 2013, 15:49 PM
  • Let me know whether are you OK with the work. Thanks
    ScholarPro | Mar 21, 2013, 11:58 AM
  • Hi, it seems to me that you somehow hesitate to contact back. I find it quite unfair to have waited for your response and your release of payment. Hope you will contact in 48 hours latest. Otherwise, I would not really refrain to find alternative ways to contact you. Thanks for your understanding
    ScholarPro | Mar 23, 2013, 03:34 AM
  • Just few remarks how I can reach you direct contact method: https://plus.google.com/100716460121230921744/posts indirect contact method http://www.csun.edu/engl/profile.php?id=155 Let me know which one you prefer.. Thanks
    ScholarPro | Mar 23, 2013, 03:50 AM
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