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RAP C writing essay

Date Posted: 15/04/2017
Category: English
Due Date: 16/04/2017
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    User_10859 | Apr 15, 2017, 18:42 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 15, 2017, 18:45 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 15, 2017, 18:59 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 16, 2017, 14:04 PM
  • i will wait until the professor see the work and tell me what to fix . so now I will assign you to do other work . ready ?
    User_10859 | Apr 16, 2017, 16:43 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 16, 2017, 17:09 PM
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    User_10859 | Apr 16, 2017, 17:32 PM
  • come on where are you , I just posted the 500 essay words
    User_10859 | Apr 16, 2017, 17:58 PM
  • the professor has some notes
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 00:38 AM
  • Hey there. Well, mainly looks good. For some obvious editing targets, there are some wording errors (related to usage) to fix. For example, in the first paragraph, try "clear" rather than "vivid" -- they seem the same, but "vivid" usually refers to an image or colour, and just by conventional usage doesn't work here (that's not something that would be obvious from, say, a thesaurus, unfortunately!) Similarly, in the penultimate paragraph, you say, "In an attempt to scrape these challenges..." Try "meet" or "handle" or so on -- scrape is just wrong. Not sure where that came from. Sticking with that passage, for content, it would be nice to see a further exploration of that problem. You continue by saying "...the teachers should be ready to demonstrate the effectiveness of active participation in the classroom. For instance, the teacher should clarify that participation is the basis of long-term understanding of class concepts." Sure, but little kids, even without developmental problems, won't always be able to value this kind of long-term thinking. Frankly, a lot of adults don't really grasp it, ha ha!!! Anyway, how might teachers *practically* get kids to participate when they don't want to and can't, ironically, understand the value of "long-term understanding"? What could that teacher *actually* do in that situation? A bit of this sort of detail would really help bring your point out of the realm of theory and into fact. There are some other, obvious little things to polish. Have a Works Cited page that starts on the top of the page. Use a proper Page Break, not just white space, to get to the separate page -- delete all that white space and just "Insert Page Break" after the end of your paper, before the Works Cited. Also, don't put a period after "Works Cited" on the actual page. Put a space after "Neuwirth" in the attribution -- so you get "(Neuwirth 45)" and not "(Neuwirth45)". Use a proper full heading (it's right in the RAP Guidelines.) Etc. Watch for similar errors as listed here. As for the big stuff -- all the major bits look like they're in place. The "disadvantages" bit comes rather later than usual, but that's because you combined the explanation of your solution with the advantages of your solution -- that's not the "stock" way to do this, but you've got all the parts, so I'm fine with it. Mainly, watch for wording problems like the ones I noted, and sort out the heading thing and so on (it's good practice.)
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 00:38 AM
  • edit exactly what he said , and make sure when you finish
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 00:39 AM
  • send me the revision within 10 hours , when you finish you will work on the other assignment
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 00:43 AM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 11:36 AM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 15:46 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 17, 2017, 17:01 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 17, 2017, 17:14 PM
  • Please I want the revised file within an hour , because I will assign you to the other one . The other one is due within 12 hours so please finish it quickly.
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 17:54 PM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 18:51 PM
  • yes I am correcting bro
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 17, 2017, 18:52 PM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 18:57 PM
  • please make sure for everything . this is my chance to get A+
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 18:58 PM
  • I have uploaded the revised assignment and it is perfect. please release the payment now. you will get an A
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 17, 2017, 19:50 PM
  • i will send it to the professor and I will see
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:07 PM
  • are you ready now to sign you the other assignment ? will you do it in 2 hours ?
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:08 PM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:14 PM
  • if you can't I will assign another one , because I need it in 2-3 hours
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:15 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 17, 2017, 20:16 PM
  • com on bro , it just 500-600 words !!!!!
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:18 PM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:28 PM
  • Not today
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 17, 2017, 20:29 PM
  • If tomorrow that's okay
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 17, 2017, 20:29 PM
  • tomorrow ? I have class tomorrow so I need it today to writ it down
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:32 PM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:34 PM
  • I just posted the new assignment if you wanna do it just text me .
    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 20:40 PM
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    User_10859 | Apr 17, 2017, 21:24 PM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 18, 2017, 04:10 AM
  • the professor has little note , just fix to be the final editing
    User_10859 | Apr 18, 2017, 05:09 AM
  • Looks better -- the fixes and content additions are correct. Still needs a proper heading and some polish (watch capitalization in the title, for example!)
    User_10859 | Apr 18, 2017, 05:10 AM
  • OKAY LET ME FIX IT. what about the other assignment?
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 18, 2017, 05:12 AM
  • I did it by myself because I did not have time . I have an assignment you will do in few days , part 2 for statistics .
    User_10859 | Apr 18, 2017, 05:18 AM
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    ExcellentTutor | Apr 18, 2017, 05:20 AM
  • remember what he said last time ' use italics for book titles and " " marks for article titles. " do not forget the quotation .
    User_10859 | Apr 18, 2017, 05:23 AM
  • ok
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 18, 2017, 05:24 AM
  • I have uploaded the revised work. now release the payment
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 18, 2017, 05:54 AM
  • bro you didn't fix the " use italics for book titles and " " marks for article titles. "
    User_10859 | Apr 19, 2017, 03:17 AM
  • do yoi want that changed?
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 19, 2017, 04:49 AM
  • yes , make it as i said please
    User_10859 | Apr 19, 2017, 17:25 PM
  • okay
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 19, 2017, 17:27 PM
  • where is final revised file ?
    User_10859 | Apr 20, 2017, 04:45 AM
  • uploaded
    ExcellentTutor | Apr 20, 2017, 05:26 AM
  • great , thanks my friend
    User_10859 | Apr 20, 2017, 05:29 AM
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    User_10859 | Apr 23, 2017, 17:47 PM
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