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i need the writer to revise my 3 essays for my eng class. Each essay need to revise 3 times. after the writer finished the first revise for the 3 essays then i will go to tutor and same thing for the second revisions and third revisions. Total needs to revise 3 times on each essay. Each revision i hope you can add about half page to one page bc i need 3-5 pages after the third revision. The first revise needs to be done before tomorrow Monday night. one revision for 3 essays per week. total of 3 weeks hopefully we can done in 2 weeks

Date Posted: 06/08/2017
Category: English
Due Date: 07/08/2017
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i need the writer to revise my 3 essays for my eng class. Each essay need to revise 3 times. after the writer finished the first revise for the 3 essays then i will go to tutor and same thing for the second revisions and third revisions. Total needs to revise 3 times on each essay. Each revision i hope you can add about half page to one page bc i need 3-5 pages after the third revision.

The first revise needs to be done before tomorrow Monday night.

one revision for 3 essays per week. total of 3 weeks hopefully we can done in 2 weeks


Note: focus on the development, organization, and mechanical correctness.
Provides a thesis that responds to all or most of the topic at least implicitly;
Is organized in a sequential (if not always logical) manner that is consistent with paragraph conventions;
Offers some supporting evidence/reasons and attempts to elaborate with some details;
Is written in correct sentences, and word choices are correct, although possibly vague and/or repetitious at times;
Demonstrates basic control of grammar, punctuation and mechanics so that sentence level errors, if present, do not distract or confuse the reader.
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superbwriter 9 years, 3 months ago
Rated 8.96 earned 12951.63 around 482 assignments.
Hello
$70.00
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    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:02 PM
  • Hi friend
    superbwriter | Jun 08, 2017, 22:16 PM
  • Hello
    superbwriter | Jun 08, 2017, 22:23 PM
  • so you do understand you need to revise 3 essays 3 times right?
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:28 PM
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phoniextutor 9 years, 3 months ago
Rated 8.98 earned 50856.21 around 1767 assignments.
Hello my friend, would you kindly grant me the precious chance to assist you
$60.00
  • so you do understand you need to revise 3 essays 3 times right?
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:10 PM
  • yes and when is your deadline
    phoniextutor | Jun 08, 2017, 22:12 PM
  • The first revision needs to be done tomorrow night. i already uploaded the three essays. after that, i will need to go to campus and get some feedback from the tutor and have the tutor sign bc is mandatory
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:18 PM
  • then i will upload the tutoring response sheet to you and you can continue the second revision
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:21 PM
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1stclasshonour 9 years, 3 months ago
Rated 9.22 earned 30856.96 around 773 assignments.
hi
$200.00
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    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:49 PM
  • Am willing and ready to assist you
    User_10376 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:50 PM
  • so you do understand you need to revise 3 essays 3 times right?
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:54 PM
  • the first revision needs to be done tomorrow night. i already uploaded the three essays. after that, i will need to go to campus and get some feedback from the tutor and have the tutor sign bc is mandatory
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:54 PM
  • then i will upload the tutoring response sheet to you and you can continue the second revision
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:55 PM
  • Yes , please assign me
    User_10376 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:57 PM
  • Total of 9 essays in 3 weeks
    User_10376 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:59 PM
  • Total of 9 essays in 3 weeks
    User_10376 | Jun 08, 2017, 22:59 PM
  • I'm sorry. $200 is out of my budget
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:02 PM
  • How do you have and be fair ,,, for 9 essays
    User_10376 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:04 PM
  • Before you assign me , check the feedback I get from my clients
    User_10376 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:04 PM
  • Its 3 essays. Each essay needs to revise 3 times.
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:08 PM
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committedwriter 9 years, 3 months ago
Rated 9.14 earned 89563.32 around 3017 assignments.
Hello, please assign this assignment to me and be assured of quality work, which will be delivered in time and free from plagiarism.
$70.00
  • so you do understand you need to revise 3 essays 3 times right?
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:01 PM
  • the first revision needs to be done tomorrow night. i already uploaded the three essays. after that, i will need to go to campus and get some feedback from the tutor and have the tutor sign bc is mandatory
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:01 PM
  • then i will upload the tutoring response sheet to you and you can continue the second revision
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:02 PM
  • Yes I understand.
    committedwriter | Jun 08, 2017, 23:03 PM
  • You can assign and I will begin revising the essays right away.
    committedwriter | Jun 08, 2017, 23:13 PM
  • I will begin working on them now. I will send as soon as I am done.
    committedwriter | Jun 08, 2017, 23:14 PM
  • assigned! let me know if you have any questions
    User_8336 | Jun 08, 2017, 23:14 PM
  • I have sent you the first two. I will send the third in a short while.
    committedwriter | Jul 08, 2017, 13:45 PM
  • I have sent the third one. Please check.
    committedwriter | Jul 08, 2017, 21:02 PM
  • ok thanks
    User_8336 | Sep 08, 2017, 04:55 AM
  • I am waiting to do the second revision.
    committedwriter | Aug 15, 2017, 05:17 AM
  • i will upload the sec one tonight=]
    User_8336 | Aug 15, 2017, 16:35 PM
  • I just uploaded 2 essays also the writing prompt.
    User_8336 | Aug 16, 2017, 18:29 PM
  • so you can understand the topic more=]
    User_8336 | Aug 16, 2017, 18:31 PM
  • The tutor said the essay needs more development Facts--->agreed, prove Reasons--->Why? Incident---->personal Examples--->general Details--->adj, adverb
    User_8336 | Aug 16, 2017, 18:34 PM
  • Let me know if you have any question. Thank you!
    User_8336 | Aug 16, 2017, 18:36 PM
  • Hi, I have added some development and personal lessons in the two essays.
    committedwriter | Aug 17, 2017, 15:47 PM
  • Hello...When will you pay?
    committedwriter | Aug 21, 2017, 05:35 AM
  • i will release the payment after the third revision(~8/29 or 8/30)
    User_8336 | Aug 21, 2017, 23:29 PM
  • For all essays: the tutor said the sentence structure and grammar looks ok but 3 essays thesis are not strong and body paragraph are not so connected to each other. Conclusion can be more connected to thesis the main idea (Each essays needs about 900words)
    User_8336 | Aug 24, 2017, 05:42 AM
  • I just uploaded need for change. Yon can now do the sec revision for need for change. Thankyou=]
    User_8336 | Aug 24, 2017, 05:44 AM
  • You can also work on impact in my life and illusion of success(final revision) For impact in my life: The tutor said this essay feels like listing each para is not connected to each other(also illusion of success). the first body para is about hardworking, the sec is about do not give up, the third body para is about family(I'm a female so please change the word father to parent in the last sentence of the third body para. Thank you=}
    User_8336 | Aug 24, 2017, 06:02 AM
  • Hello, Can u please update me? Thank you=)
    User_8336 | Aug 25, 2017, 22:10 PM
  • Hi, I was away for a while but am now working on it.
    committedwriter | Aug 26, 2017, 08:26 AM
  • hi, can you try to upload the sec revision ( need for change) before 7:30am PDT 8/28 and all the final revision before noon 8/29. Thank you=]
    User_8336 | Aug 28, 2017, 05:18 AM
  • Hi, I sent the revisions.
    committedwriter | Aug 28, 2017, 10:03 AM
  • Can you pay today?
    committedwriter | Aug 29, 2017, 15:08 PM
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