Instruction
i need the writer to revise my 3 essays for my eng class. Each essay need to revise 3 times. after the writer finished the first revise for the 3 essays then i will go to tutor and same thing for the second revisions and third revisions. Total needs to revise 3 times on each essay. Each revision i hope you can add about half page to one page bc i need 3-5 pages after the third revision.
The first revise needs to be done before tomorrow Monday night.
one revision for 3 essays per week. total of 3 weeks hopefully we can done in 2 weeks
Note: focus on the development, organization, and mechanical correctness.
Provides a thesis that responds to all or most of the topic at least implicitly;
Is organized in a sequential (if not always logical) manner that is consistent with paragraph conventions;
Offers some supporting evidence/reasons and attempts to elaborate with some details;
Is written in correct sentences, and word choices are correct, although possibly vague and/or repetitious at times;
Demonstrates basic control of grammar, punctuation and mechanics so that sentence level errors, if present, do not distract or confuse the reader.