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Proof Read In Correct Essay.......

Date Posted: 04/03/2018
Category: English
Due Date: 04/03/2018
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Your content and organization are quite good, and the main things you need to work on are punctuation, formatting, and writing style. For instance, throughout you write in the passive voice (e.g., "the suggestion is raised..."). In terms of formatting, your figures (which should exist) should also have captions and be referenced throughout in the text (e.g., "See Figure 3"). In terms of writing style, I encourage you to edit your prose in a way that streamlines your thoughts. Write as simply and directly as you can, both on the sentence level and in your overall report: go as smoothly and directly as possible. In general, be sure to look over the rubric to ensure you are fully meeting the standards for the assignment and meeting the needs of the assignment: define the problem and the research/approaches toward fixing it, interpreting it in such a way that gives a sense about what steps need to be taken next.
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