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improving an feasibility report. I have written an feasibility report about BlackBerry’s Hub+ Market Feasibility and it needs to be improved. All of the comments of my instructor is attached down bellow and the banner for the actual report and the how the report is graded is attached below to so you don't get confused in different files.

Date Posted: 28/07/2018
Category: English
Due Date: 29/07/2018
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Read the banner first then the paper then the instructors comments so that you fully understand it
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proffesoranncarrl 8 years, 2 months ago
Rated 9.76 earned 242948.42 around 9258 assignments.
Hello friend are you there. i have read all the instructions and thus i know what you want. please consider my bid and expect well addressed comments. thanks as you assign me. kind regards ann carrl
$20.00
  • Hello friend are you there please
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:10 PM
  • I have read all the instructions and now I know what you want. Please consider my bid friend for quality work with all comments addressed. Thanks
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:10 PM
  • Can we have a deal please
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:10 PM
  • Hello friend
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:15 PM
  • Did you fully understand the assignment? and can you finish it under 18 hours? and do you have experience on writing a feasibility report?
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:19 PM
  • Yes
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:25 PM
  • Hello friend are you there please
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:26 PM
  • Expect all the comments to be addressed to the fullest
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:26 PM
  • I can finish it in 18 hours and I have an experience in writing feasibility reports. Thanks
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:27 PM
  • I have a question. I can only see two. Files. One the report you wrote and the other one is the requirements of the report. Where are the professors comments
    proffesoranncarrl | Jul 28, 2018, 17:32 PM
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surrogatewriter 8 years, 2 months ago
Rated 9.31 earned 75264.37 around 2854 assignments.
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funwriter 8 years, 2 months ago
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  • i promise the best in this work
    funwriter | Jul 28, 2018, 17:07 PM
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GreatContentCreator 8 years, 2 months ago
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  • Did you fully understand the assignment? and can you finish it under 18 hours? and do you have experience on writing a feasibility report?
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:19 PM
  • Hi friend, I fully understand the instructions and I have written one before
    User_4173 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:21 PM
  • I can finish it on time
    User_4173 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:22 PM
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annewriter 8 years, 2 months ago
Rated 9.56 earned 24237.52 around 846 assignments.
Hi, please assign it to me.
$20.00
  • Hey did you read the comments? and can you finish it under 18 hours?
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:22 PM
  • I willing to give to you when can you finish it? because you wrote it so you know the whole assignment
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:23 PM
  • I am going through the comment s now, just give a few minutes to read through
    annewriter | Jul 28, 2018, 17:23 PM
  • okay
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:24 PM
  • I understand what needs to be done and yes I can finish it within your timeframe.
    annewriter | Jul 28, 2018, 17:27 PM
  • Hey sorry I can't do 30$ 20$ is really fair you just have to edit it now write the whole assignment
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:28 PM
  • I am willing to do 20$
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:29 PM
  • Lowered to $20
    annewriter | Jul 28, 2018, 17:29 PM
  • Done assigned
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:31 PM
  • Okay, thanks
    annewriter | Jul 28, 2018, 17:32 PM
  • please make sure you finish in 18 hours because I have to submit it in 20 hours. And please follow all of the comments please
    User_10754 | Jul 28, 2018, 17:32 PM
  • Okay, I try my best
    annewriter | Jul 28, 2018, 17:35 PM
  • Hello friend, Please reupload the draft with your instructors comments.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 03:39 AM
  • Hello friend, Please reupload the draft with the instructors comments as I am missing it from my side and I cannot go ahead to revising the paper without it.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 03:52 AM
  • Please reupload the file with instructor's comments as the one you uploaded seems to be corrupt, I can no longer open it.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 04:11 AM
  • Hey I have uploaded it again please check it
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 13:12 PM
  • When can you finish it I have to upload it in 8 hours can you finish it in 7 hours?
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 13:14 PM
  • I can try to email the instructor now just for extra time but try to finish please with in 7 hours
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 13:17 PM
  • I will try my best to have it finished by then,but will let you know if I get overwhelmed so you can request deadline extension.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 13:18 PM
  • Sure, we will avoid some inconveniences if you email him/her
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 13:19 PM
  • okay just try your best and ill ask my instructor
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 13:22 PM
  • Okay, I will try my best.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 13:27 PM
  • how is it going ?
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 16:26 PM
  • I am still working on it.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 16:50 PM
  • is it going smoothly?
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 17:08 PM
  • Yes
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 17:14 PM
  • I think I have thoroughly revised the areas that were highlighted by your instructor. The introduction part is the one that needed thorough work.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 17:48 PM
  • Please find attached.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 17:52 PM
  • Areas revised are colored.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 17:56 PM
  • you can revise it more if you need to you have 3 hours more
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 18:19 PM
  • Did you fix all of his comments?
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 18:22 PM
  • Yes, you can confirm by checking the sections in color against the comments.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 18:27 PM
  • The introduction is the one that needed fixing. Also, the professor states in his comments that we closely followed instructions and what was expected of the report. So, I tend to think we are good to go.
    annewriter | Jul 29, 2018, 18:32 PM
  • Okay let me send it to my instructor and see his feedback first
    User_10754 | Jul 29, 2018, 20:50 PM
  • Hi my instructor replied with the points that needs more improving or maybe you missed I have attached it above please take a look at it
    User_10754 | Aug 03, 2018, 12:33 PM
  • Hi, I will look at it once I get home because I am at a semina somewhere.
    annewriter | Aug 03, 2018, 12:57 PM
  • okay thanks
    User_10754 | Aug 03, 2018, 12:58 PM
  • Please read it and can you please work on the points you may have missed. and can you let me know when can you finish it?
    User_10754 | Aug 03, 2018, 21:01 PM
  • are you there?
    User_10754 | Aug 04, 2018, 13:44 PM
  • Hello please respond because I have to submit it in 18hours
    User_10754 | Aug 04, 2018, 15:26 PM
  • Hey I talked to the instructor for a couple extra hours can you finish it in 18hours from now?
    User_10754 | Aug 04, 2018, 22:42 PM
  • hellooo
    User_10754 | Aug 04, 2018, 22:42 PM
  • ill give bonus if you can finish it in 12 hours
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 06:29 AM
  • Hello, I am really sorry for not responding to your emails on time. I was offline.
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 06:59 AM
  • okay no worries can you finish it please in 12 hours?
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 07:09 AM
  • Yes, I will try my best to finish it within your time-frame
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 07:12 AM
  • okay thank you his feedback is attached in file for please make sure you improve the points he mention and fix the citation which he has commented on in the file
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 07:14 AM
  • Hey are you almost done? and can you make all of the paper in black not blue like last time and last time you added parts in parenthesis can you delete that too because its the final draft it has to professional
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 17:19 PM
  • how is it going?
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 17:19 PM
  • its been 10 hours
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 17:49 PM
  • I am still working on it. there are a few things that were confusing me, but I am trying to fix them.
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 18:15 PM
  • okay
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 18:23 PM
  • when will you be done with the report approximately?
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 19:02 PM
  • I want to do a thorough revision. So, is it okay if I upload it within the nxt 5hrs?
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 19:08 PM
  • because I have to submit it in 2 hours
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 19:09 PM
  • I can do 3 hours
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 19:15 PM
  • the instructor won't allow 5 hours because I asked him for extra time he gave me 3 hours
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 19:17 PM
  • Okay, I will upload within the nxt 3 hours
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 19:17 PM
  • okay please make sure you finish it in 3 hours please
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 19:19 PM
  • are you done?
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 21:12 PM
  • I think I am done with all areas that required revising.
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 21:16 PM
  • Find attached document.
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 21:22 PM
  • Download the last file uploaded.
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 21:23 PM
  • Which one is it the second or the third?
    User_10754 | Aug 05, 2018, 21:27 PM
  • Third
    annewriter | Aug 05, 2018, 21:35 PM
  • Hey I have another assignment about the feasibility report, I have to create a presentation about it its about 7 to 10 slides and was wondering if you are willing to do it? please let me know as soon as you can.
    User_10754 | Aug 13, 2018, 21:00 PM
  • just let me know if you are willing
    User_10754 | Aug 13, 2018, 21:03 PM
  • Hello friend, I am really interested in helping you in your new assignment. Please let me know when you post it. Thanks
    annewriter | Aug 13, 2018, 21:43 PM
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