Instruction
Eliminate all of the first person (I, my, me, you). Several sentences are incomplete and some that need to be split into two sentences. Punctuation and grammar need improvement. add any more information on commercial construction (with citations). I'm attaching a sample paper "SAMPLE PAPER" on what it should look like for your reference. the paper that needs corrections is "FINAL REPORT" which will be uploaded upon assigning, professor comments are also in the paper to help you out
size-12, Arial, single spaced, 1-inch margin all sides