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write me an introduction and a conclusion for the file I uploaded. (Complete Draft with Introduction, Body, and Conclusion in coherent, cohesive sentences & paragraphs) You have some interesting ideas here, but you need to focus on 2 things: organization and evidence. You need a one-paragraph introduction that clearly ends with a thesis statement answering your research question. (Remember that you can still have body paragraphs that explain key concepts in more detail after the intro.) Then, go through the paper and find every claim you make -- is there scholarly evidence to back up that claim? For example, how can you show that people in collectivist societies don't feel oppressed or discriminated against? Since this is research writing, we need to use evidence to support each idea