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I need to redo my narrative frame, curtain words, a point, dialogue, details, and tension. I do not what to change the entire essay.

Date Posted: 25/10/2019
Category: English
Due Date: 28/10/2019
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I do not what to change the entire essay. the total wording is a minimum of 500 and no more than 700 words. I need to reduce the long drive and long vacation I wrote about in the essay. The goal is to have a narrative frame, curtain words, a point, dialogue, details, and tension. I need my incident to start much earlier.
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  • Thanks
    surrogatewriter | Oct 26, 2019, 01:51 AM
  • What is the status?
    User_23843 | Oct 28, 2019, 03:59 AM
  • Hello, the progress is okay. I have just checked inn and found your previous project revision. How much time do you have to fix it?
    surrogatewriter | Oct 28, 2019, 04:03 AM
  • Your talking about the message I sent earlier today right?
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  • yes
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  • I asked for an extended time. Can you have it revised by tomorrow, please?
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  • Okay thank you
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  • This one is not correct. The essay you sent must be someone else. I did not need a new essay. I needed to redo my narrative frame, curtain words, a point, dialogue, details, and tension. I do not what to change the essay. I need to reduce the long drive and long vacation I wrote in the essay; it is too lengthy.
    User_23843 | Oct 29, 2019, 00:55 AM
  • Hello? This due in less than an hour
    User_23843 | Oct 29, 2019, 03:35 AM
  • In simple terms, what do you want me to do on the essay?
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  • Okay, do you want me to concentrate on grammar and make it perfect or what do you want me to revisit?
    surrogatewriter | Oct 29, 2019, 03:45 AM
  • I need to make it less than 700 words. I need to fix the tension and narrative frame. Paragraph two is two lengthy and I need to find a better placement for paragraph four.
    User_23843 | Oct 29, 2019, 03:46 AM
  • Alright
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  • Please find the attached document
    surrogatewriter | Oct 29, 2019, 04:32 AM
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