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Please read the feedback comments on my original paper and amend based on it, keep the main structure though. Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch/8MqTOEospfo
Date Posted: 05/03/2021
Category: English
Due Date: 06/03/2021
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Please read the feedback comments on my original paper and amend based on it, keep the main structure though. Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch/8MqTOEospfo
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  • Hello, I just got the feedback from this paper and I assigned a new job, I need you to fix it based on the feedback
    User_26269 | Mar 05, 2021, 18:50 PM
  • You made this paper before so all I'm asking is to fix some other issues on that paper
    User_26269 | Mar 05, 2021, 18:50 PM
  • Okay. I will
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  • hello , I need it sometime today
    User_26269 | Mar 06, 2021, 06:36 AM
  • I will upload an example analysis so you know what I'm after
    User_26269 | Mar 06, 2021, 06:37 AM
  • hello??
    User_26269 | Mar 06, 2021, 19:53 PM
  • ???????????
    User_26269 | Mar 07, 2021, 02:11 AM
  • Hello friend. I'm almost done
    WritingPartner | Mar 07, 2021, 02:40 AM
  • And what happened to the pdf you uploaded?
    WritingPartner | Mar 07, 2021, 05:19 AM
  • What do you mean?
    User_26269 | Mar 07, 2021, 05:25 AM
  • dont know why it is like that but I just reuploaded it
    User_26269 | Mar 07, 2021, 05:26 AM
  • Still not working
    WritingPartner | Mar 07, 2021, 08:56 AM
  • Send me your email so I can send it
    User_26269 | Mar 07, 2021, 09:16 AM
  • I'm not really allowed to share my email but could you please upload it on google drive and send it as a shareble link.
    WritingPartner | Mar 07, 2021, 09:51 AM
  • https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aHk0PzAKGHjOB9KX_PDHadfnOz3k2d6U/view?usp=sharing
    User_26269 | Mar 07, 2021, 09:55 AM
  • Revised. Please check
    WritingPartner | Mar 07, 2021, 14:32 PM
  • I’ve attached my comments in regard to your paper. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1srVa6sBtaMqMiM-a9LhXtlAZaByV_dAp/view?usp=sharing Overall comments: you make some good observations in the paper. You are entirely right in bringing up our Founding Fathers, the ones like Franklin and Jefferson who so respected science. They seem to have foreseen that science could and would lead to great things in this country. Is there a way you can bring your comments about our forefathers into your thesis for the paper? Tyson doesn’t mention those science-loving forefathers, but he does implicitly rely on them and what they helped make possible—an unleashing of science from the bonds of religion and royal edict. Also, if you want to give examples of recent efforts to shut down science, that’s fine, but give more details and give dates.
    User_26269 | Mar 08, 2021, 05:44 AM
  • Wording and organization are the biggest concerns here. Reading aloud will help a lot—you can better hear what’s not working and address it. In regard to organization, I suggest you outline your own paper. Go through it paragraph by paragraph and figure out what you’re saying. Then you can place similar material together and present the material logically—what should be presented first, second, etc.
    User_26269 | Mar 08, 2021, 05:44 AM
  • Let me revise
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