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english paper revising

Date Posted: 05/08/2019
Category: English
Due Date: 06/08/2019
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Revising an Academic Final Draft Purpose of assignment: To practice revision skills by revising your Week 6 Rough Draft. Procedure: For this assignment, you will revise your Rough Draft by considering the feedback you have received from your instructor and fellow classmates. Please note that revision is not the same as fixing-errors. While you are expected to proofread your final paper carefully, you will also need to consider global and local revisions. (See your textbook for definitions of these terms.) The goal is to write the best paper you can, and, while you have received feedback from readers (your instructor and the class), the choices of what and how to revise are up to you. However, please note that your revision must show significant effort to improve the quality of your writing. This may include (but is not limited to) the following: · strengthening your argument · narrowing the focus of your topic · reconsidering your audience, purpose, or exigence · writing a more compelling introduction · clarifying your thesis · tightening organization · using credible sources or more fully integrating the sources you have · wrapping up your paper with a satisfying conclusion · citing and documenting sources correctly.
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