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I wrote a thesis statement if needs correction please do so. I need a refutation paragraph included. I need 5 sources to be included, in text citations. Topic Question: Is college education in line with the job market? Needs to include an Annotated Bibliography, reference page, and abstract. My essay is an EVALUATION CLAIM. References must be scholarly journals or websites must end in .edu .gov .net credible sources only. No direct quotes. the essay must e from 600 to 700 words.APA FORMAT 7TH EDITION. I Also need an outline of what will be written in each paragraph basically a rough draft before you start on. the essay. I have also included my annotated bibliography so you can see what sources I have used or want to use.

Date Posted: 24/07/2020
Category: English
Due Date: 25/07/2020
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*THESIS STATEMENT* "The disconnection between higher education and the workforce has created a gap, due to the lack of experience, the misconception that people with higher education are fully prepared and ready to take upon the position of their major, spending hundreds of hours studying subjects that are irrelevant to the modern labor market." Introduction needs a hook, background, the essay map. The body paragraph 1 (reason 1) including a topic sentence, evidence from your articles, discussion of that evidence, closing sentence. The second Body paragraph 2 (reason 2) needs to include a topic sentence, evidence from your articles, discussion of that evidence, closing sentence. The Body paragraph 3 (reason 3) needs to include a topic sentence, evidence from your articles, discussion of that evidence and a closing sentence. The Body paragraph 4 (refutation) needs to include a topic sentence, evidence from your articles, discussion of that evidence and PROVING HOW IT IS WRONG, closing sentence. The Conclusion needs to be a Summary of your reasons and Call to Action.
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