Instruction
At least 7 full pages
Please follow the feedback and research paper proposal for editing.
Please DON'T changes the meaning for research question and other parts.
A ---B(light blue highlights) is means sub-claim, editing base on intro.
a----c is means on of reason for sub-claim.
1...3 is the evidence for reasons.
Yellow Highlights is the translated part need to fix grammar.
Editing others parts in this paper follow the feedback and research paper proposal
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3 FULL pages
Editing the essay follow below question:
1.The way that you did or did not change your writing process during the course of the quarter
2.How you discovered and developed your ideas, thesis, subclasims, reasons, analysis, and the other elements of your arguments.
3.Your development as an analytic writer.
4.How you have developed as a critical reader of what you read for class, including your peers’ argument.
5.The link you discovered between the course reading (and your own research).
6.What you have learned about academic arguments in general.
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The way that you did or did not change your writing process during the course of the quarter
How you discovered and developed your ideas, thesis, subclasims, reasons, analysis, and the other elements of your arguments.
Your development as an analytic writer.
How you have developed as a critical reader of what you read for class, including your peers’ argument.
The link you discovered between the course reading (and your own research).
What you have learned about academic arguments in general.